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Masterclass with Shakhnoza Salimjonova, Princeton University How to Write the Essay That Gets In One hour, live, not recorded. She will show what a strong essay looks like and take real essays apart line by line. ✍️ Send your essay before the session A rough draft or one paragraph is enough. If yours is picked, you get feedback from a Princeton graduate in front of the room. 📚 It does not stop on the 16th Reserving a spot gets you into the closed channel. Useful posts every day, and after the masterclass: • A webinar on UK admissions • Masterclasses with scholarship holders • Materials we do not post publicly. 💬 To reserve your spot, message the admin: https://t.me/m/tsWjSwDEMGM6

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"The hardest part of my application wasn't the SAT or extracurriculars. It was the essay." Shakhnoza studied public policy at Princeton. When she was writing her own essay, she had no idea if it was any good. She rewrote it multiple times before something finally clicked. That one page took the longest, and it turned out to be the part that mattered most. She was sitting where you are now, not long ago. In this masterclass she will show what a strong essay actually looks like, and take real essays apart line by line. 📆 August 16 · Live, not recorded. ✍️ To reserve your spot: https://t.me/m/tsWjSwDEMGM6

📌 Many students write a strong introduction but struggle with the conclusion In this video, you’ll learn a simple formula for ending your essay clearly and confidently. Real examples, weak vs. strong endings, and a structure you can use in your own essay. 👇 Comment “+” below and we’ll send you the full guide. TopCoach | Telegram | Instagram | YouTube | LinkedIn

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A student told us something we keep hearing ❌He applied twice. Strong grades, good scores, real activities. Two rejections. When we asked what went wrong, he said: "I think it was my essays. But nobody ever told me." You cannot fix what you cannot see. …

Finished writing your essay? Don’t submit it yet 👀 The strongest essays are not written once, they are revised several times. We created a 10-question Revision Checklist to help you check the substance of your essay, not just the grammar. 👇Comment “checklist” below, and we’ll send it to you for free. TopCoach | Telegram | Instagram | YouTube | LinkedIn

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A student told us something we keep hearing ❌He applied twice. Strong grades, good scores, real activities. Two rejections. When we asked what went wrong, he said: "I think it was my essays. But nobody ever told me." You cannot fix what you cannot see. That's why the August 16 masterclass is not a lecture, it's a live teardown. Shakhnoza will open real essays in front of you and take them apart: • why one opening pulls the reader in, and why the next one loses them • the exact line where an essay stops being memorable • what an admissions officer is actually doing while reading yours • how a weak paragraph gets rebuilt, in real time By the end, you'll have seen the standard and you can hold your own essay next to it. Shakhnoza Salimjonova Princeton University, School of Public and International Affairs 📅 August 16 | 20:00 Live. Not recorded. Seats limited - paid entry. ✍️ To reserve yours, message: https://t.me/m/tsWjSwDEMGM6

🤔 How to do research? If you are struggling with doing research, in this video I explained 3 simple steps that will help you. Watch the full video to learn more. In the TopCoach Research Program, we have explained how to do academic research in an easy and understandable way. Subscribe to our channel and share this video with your friends. TopCoach | Telegram | Instagram | YouTube | LinkedIn