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TRUE , FALSE AND NOT GIVEN Matn: Chocolate has been enjoyed by people for hundreds of years. It was first discovered in Central America and was considered a luxury drink by the Mayans and Aztecs. Later, Europeans added sugar to make it sweeter, and it quickly became popular across the continent. Today, chocolate is produced in many countries and is one of the most consumed sweets worldwide. However, doctors warn that eating too much chocolate may lead to health problems such as obesity and tooth decay. Savollar: 1. The Mayans and Aztecs first discovered chocolate. 2. Europeans made chocolate sweeter by adding sugar. 3. Chocolate is produced only in America today. 4. Doctors believe eating too much chocolate can cause health problems. 5. Chocolate was originally discovered in Europe.
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POSITIVE DEVELOPMENTS=> 1. Convenience for customers People can shop at flexible times, even late at night or early morning. It helps individuals who work long hours. They can manage their shopping easily. 2. BOOST TO THE ECONOMY? Longer hours mean more sales and higher profits for business. Increase employment opportunities, as more staff are needed to cover shifts. 3. TOURSIM BENEFITS Tourism often appreciate late-opening shops, enhancing their experience. Can make cities appear more vibrant and modern. 4. REDUCED CONGESTION. Spreading shopping activities across longer hours prevents overcrowding during peak times.
TASK 2: In some countries more and more shops are open longer hours every day. What are the positive and negative developments of this?
=> Advantages of social media - Easier communication: allows instant, low‑cost contact with friends, family, and colleagues across distances (messaging, voice/video calls). - Information access and learning: provides news, tutorials, online courses, and expert opinions that broaden knowledge quickly. - Professional networking and job opportunities: platforms help with recruitment, personal branding, freelancing, and business promotion. - Community building and activism: enables organization of events, fundraising, and awareness campaigns; connects people with shared interests. - Convenience and efficiency: scheduling, remote work, and customer service become faster and more flexible. => Disadvantages of social media - Reduced face‑to‑face skills: overreliance on digital interaction can weaken conversational skills, body‑language awareness, and empathy. - Attention and productivity loss: constant notifications and scrolling fragment focus and reduce work or study effectiveness. - Mental health risks: social comparison, cyberbullying, and addiction can increase anxiety, depression, and loneliness for some users. - Privacy and security threats: personal data can be misused, leaked, or exploited by trackers and malicious actors. - Misinformation spread: false or manipulated content can circulate rapidly, influencing opinions and causing social harm.
📆 24 AUGUST 📊 TASK 1: the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 📝TASK 2: Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Have you ever bought jewelry as a gift ? Yes, I have. As jewelry is one of the most adored gifts for women, I like giving jewelry as a gift. For example, on my mother's last birthday, I bought a golden necklace, which cost me an arm and a leg.
Cost someone an arm and leg=> something is extremely expensive or excessively pricey.
1. These days, more and more children are taking sports seriously. Is this a positive or negative development ? 2. Many parents now send their children to nursey school when they are three or four years old. Is this a positive or negative development? 3. Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours. Why are these laws being introduced? Is this positive or negative development? 4. Advertisements are becoming more and more common in every day life. Is this a positive negative development? 5. In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?
I will die trying, not only to improve my own life but also to bring comfort, dignity, and hope to my family and to everyone who struggles in this twisted world. To try is to live; to give up is to die before death itself. Even if the odds are against me, I would rather fall fighting for a better tomorrow than sit silently and watch life pass me by. @Writing_news
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INTRODUCTION FOR NEGATIVE OR POSITIVE 1️⃣ General Statement (mavzuni umumiy ta’riflash) In recent times, [mavzu] has become increasingly common / widespread due to [sabab]. (So‘nggi yillarda [mavzu] [sabab] tufayli tobora keng tarqalmoqda.) 2️⃣ Acknowledge both sides (har ikki tomonni tan olish) Although this trend can bring about certain drawbacks/benefits such as [1-2 misol], … (Garchi bu jarayon [1-2 salbiy yoki ijobiy misol]ni keltirib chiqarsa ham, …) 3️⃣ Thesis (o‘z pozitsiyangiz) I firmly believe it is a [positive/negative] development because [reason 1] and [reason 2]. (Menimcha, bu [ijobiy/salbiy] rivojlanish, chunki [sabab 1] va [sabab 2].)
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